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Jeff X Reader: Love Is A Bloody Knife.
Part Five:

Your p.o.v. –
I woke up with a towel carefully rolled under my head to prevent what I guessed was a HUGE Sore lump from touching my pillow. Each of my near severed fingers were stitched with a tight piece of thread and were incredibly itchy to the point I wanted to rip the stitching out.
Wait… I’m awake? I’m still alive! I think. Woah, woah, woah, hold the phone! What the hell happened last night?! The last thing I remember was Jeff on top of me like the ‘beautiful’ creep he is and then everything went black. I’m so confused and I still am, if not more.
I tried to sit up to begin searching for answers, but the movement knocked me sick and my head throbbed. I fell right back down to where I was lying. I was stuck – bedridden – and there was nothing I could do. I spent my time checking my wounds of the night before – my wrists and ankles are a raw purple colour, my fingers were red and spots of dried blood stained my hands, I couldn’t see my head but I felt soft golf ball under my skin. There was a rough mark on my stomach as well, but I didn’t want to reveal the possible horror hiding under my blood-stained pyjama top.

Jeff’s p.o.v. –
Well, despite all of my preparations and forward planning, last night did NOT go to plan. She – the girl – got right in the godamn way. Why can’t she just let me do my job? I’m not going to kill her while she’s unconscious; there’s no fun in that, so I just let her bleed. I did leave her a lovely little note which I do hope she finds soon.
Oh Jeffery, you are a cunning, handsome thing, aren’t you? Hahaaa! Oh man, life is good.

Eyeless Jack’s p.o.v. –
Jeff always picks the pretty ones, well, not always, but most of the time… He picks the ones that are more likely not to scream if they see you – the ones who are intrigued. It’s a shame really… It really, really is. He sure is a fun guy to be acquaintances with but it would be nice if he could just leave some of the innocent, friendly people alone. I’m not saying he’s bad, it’s just, maybe I want to… ermmm… meet some new people before they all die.
It’s like the poor girl last night didn’t see him coming… Her eyes were so wide when she saw him – it’s wasn’t pure fear in her bright eyes; there was something else… She did, however, fend Jeff off for quite a while; well, longer than the others, so I do think she deserves a little reward... Her eyes are so bright… and unresponsive when I peel them open…
I stitched and patched her up – she earned it. The cuts in her fingers bled and bled and bled and the cuts were down to the bone. There was also a huge lump on her head… It was like another head – HUGE… I made sure that wasn’t being squashed on the pillow. She’d have probably been sick in the morning if there was pressure on it. Poor girl.
But, with me being me, rewards come with a small price, but who really needs two kidneys? Don’t judge! I was hungry after all that hard work. I’m not too bad – I mean… I did leave her a letter.
I am so so sorry for the wait. I've been a bit cloudy for a few days and had really bad writer's block and didn't know where else to go with this, but I've got it solved. Hopefully you won't have to wait so long again. Again - so so sorry. Hope this is worth it. Sorry if it's not. The next part should be longer and guess who you meet again? :D

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:iconshadowasch:
ShadowAsch Featured By Owner Edited May 15, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
O.O my kidney.... wait did he take one of my kidneys?
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:iconfefe1966:
fefe1966 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Yes Shadow, he did... Jack is just a prick sometimes. XD
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:iconbunnygoblin:
Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
wait did he actually take one or did he say he was going to?
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:iconjeffythekiller01:
JEFFYTHEKILLER01 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014
No E.J. U go take Annie's kidney. She will be jelly if u take mine
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:iconprettyprettycupcake:
prettyprettycupcake Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Writer
x troll face x
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:iconzombie2315:
zombie2315 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
genuine reaction to the end-

he took my kidney... *smiles* He took my kidney XD *laughs* god damn it jack :)
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:iconangelicartcreations:
AngelicArtCreations Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Student General Artist
xD I had the same reaction
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:icongamegirl303:
GameGirl303 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
I should've known he would swipe a kidney....
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:icondirtypaws03:
dirtypaws03 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
That's okay, I didn't really need my kidneys anyways....
Sorta.... 
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:icongamerzgurl101:
gamerzgurl101 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh...jack I love you to but uh..y the fuck did you steal my kidney >< haven't I been through enough? 
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:iconfluttershyisbest1932:
Fluttershyisbest1932 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
WTF?!?!? EYELESS STOLE MY KIDNEYS?!?!?

Yeah…whatever..

it's not like I LIKED them or anything..

yeah..

u can keep those..
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:iconcomedywiz411:
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014   Writer
well, when opourtunity crawls through a window and nearly kills a girl, u take her kidney.
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:iconprettyprettycupcake:
prettyprettycupcake Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Writer
another reason why llamas exist cx
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:iconlonewolf200212:
lonewolf200212 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thank you & curse you Eyeless.
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:iconclara404:
clara404 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
he stole the kidneys right?
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:iconzuu-dovahkiin:
zuu-dovahkiin Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, one of them
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:iconkatnisslovesart:
katnissLovesArt Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Kidneys sound yummy right about now....
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:iconheiscool1234:
Heiscool1234 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
Yeah......but no really I am thinkin' about what a human kidney would taste like...well it would be bloody and I love blood cause whenever I get like a paper it I ALWAYS suck up the blood inside of it
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Heiscool1234 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
Ugh I meant papercut
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:iconcammypawz:
CammyPawz Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
jack you fudging jerk! why did you eat it! *shuders*
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:iconnebula-33:
nebula-33 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student General Artist
wait, wait, wait.wait,wait jack ATE my kidney? what? wait does jack eat kidneys? i haven't read his story yet
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:iconzuu-dovahkiin:
zuu-dovahkiin Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, that he did
The story is here creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Eye… if you wanna read c:
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG JACK!!!!!!! :iconpervycanadaplz:
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:iconfangirlhetalia:
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's America, right??(XD)
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think so...or was it some one else? I think it was like....Can-can....or something.
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:iconfangirlhetalia:
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know....I have been seeing a strange floating teddy bear, though...
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
O.o Maybe the place is haunted! *le gasp*
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:iconfangirlhetalia:
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh.
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:iconblue730:
blue730 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
What the heck Jack!!! Why you take my kidney?!
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:iconblue730:
blue730 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Also you can survive on one kidney. Just ask my brother! ^-^
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:iconcomedywiz411:
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014   Writer
uh... i think he already knew that...
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:iconblue730:
blue730 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
Oh :O___O: 
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:icondaniellasun2001:
Daniellasun2001 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Mah kidney!
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:iconwolfhoofs:
wolfhoofs Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
Duuuude I love how you kept them all in character com'on give him his props.
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Christianthecat Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student Artist

Hmm.... so i will now be known as 'the girl with stitched fingers, and no kindeys'?! XD

Jeff: Sounds fine to me.

You have a carved smile in your face, WHO'S LAUGHING NOW!?

Jeff: ... You have a *raises knife* 'point' there! Get it?

Shut up Jeff.

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:iconzuu-dovahkiin:
zuu-dovahkiin Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You still have one kidney!
And I am so using the name is the fic, that is hilarious! 
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PinkieTheAnimePerson Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Would you die if you lost your kidneys?
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Silentforestfairy Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
You can live with only one kidney. Losing both of them would be bad.
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:icontornado263263263:
tornado263263263 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student General Artist
no kidneys take care of waste in the body (EWW)
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:iconpinkietheanimeperson:
PinkieTheAnimePerson Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
MAJOR EWWW! I DIDN'T KNOW THAT!!
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:icontornado263263263:
tornado263263263 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Student General Artist
toatally gross and you have two of them nasty Vomit :mosh: 
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:iconzuu-dovahkiin:
zuu-dovahkiin Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You can live with one strong kidney, so... that's what I went on... Y'all have a strong, fully functioning kidney now
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:iconjessicakiller:
JessicaKiller Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
UGH i wanna try kidneys now.DARN YOUUUUUUUUUCURSE YOU! 
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:iconzuu-dovahkiin:
zuu-dovahkiin Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kidneys are okay, they have a very acquired taste, I guess
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Jaaahrnbeeez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
what if you only had one kidney? :o & he ate it O.O so you have no kidneys? & your like now kidneyless? OUO *slaps self* stop ruining poor author-sans mojo >.< btw, loving it so far ♥
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:iconzuu-dovahkiin:
zuu-dovahkiin Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaa, you're wonderful, not to mention motivational xD thanks :D
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:iconjaaahrnbeeez:
Jaaahrnbeeez Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
no problem x3 but seriously? what if poor reader-chan decided to get wasted but she can't because she only has one kidney or no kidneys O.Ooh, the horror xD i really gotta lay off the dramas for a while. looking foward to your next chapter, no rush :)keep up the good work.
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ghostgirl132 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
wow i love this ! Heart Dance - NaNo28 
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:iconzuu-dovahkiin:
zuu-dovahkiin Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbeatingheartplz:
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Akumu27226 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
Did E.J took my kidneys???????????OUO

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